{"id":552,"date":"2018-05-06T10:32:34","date_gmt":"2018-05-06T14:32:34","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/grimaulkin.com\/ljacob-today\/?p=552"},"modified":"2018-05-06T10:32:34","modified_gmt":"2018-05-06T14:32:34","slug":"one-of-three-completed","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/grimaulkin.com\/ljacob-today\/?p=552","title":{"rendered":"One of three completed!"},"content":{"rendered":"<p><em>Grimaulkin Redeemed<\/em> has been finished and is at the editor. I feel pretty good about this story. Even though I didn&#8217;t tie up the loose end from <em>Grimaulkin Tempted<\/em>, I developed Grimaulkin into a reluctant hero, which was the point of this book. It&#8217;s the last in the series, but I don&#8217;t know if it&#8217;ll be the last we hear of Grimaulkin. I love him so much, I can&#8217;t give him up; and, of course, it depends on if he has fans who clamor for more.<\/p>\n<p>Next is <em>Earth<\/em>. &#8220;Virgo&#8221; is at the editor&#8217;s also. I&#8217;m not thrilled with that story. I&#8217;m working on &#8220;Taurus&#8221; and it&#8217;s right now meandering into a long, drawn out, denial-of-love story that I hate. But maybe it&#8217;s one of those kinds of stories that others love.<\/p>\n<p>Lastly, of course, is <em>War Mage<\/em>. Yes, I know&#8211;I can&#8217;t seem to get past getting things &#8220;right&#8221;. My initial thought about magic in the military is that they&#8217;re not utilizing it to its fullest extent. That mages have a high turnover because they&#8217;re in the front line. I keep thinking about the single star review saying, &#8220;There&#8217;s no story here except for the last twenty pages.&#8221; So I tried to make it a murder mystery instead. But it&#8217;s really hard for me to change one character from a non-trusting enemy to a steadfast friend. It&#8217;ll take a lot longer than 40K words to do it, and I&#8217;m not sure I have the patience. If I don&#8217;t have the patience, then neither will the reader.<\/p>\n<p>At the moment, I have no other ideas. I kind of want to get out of the magical realism realm, but it&#8217;s what I know. I can easily write that kind of thing. In fact I just bought a couple of books on ceremonial (&#8220;high&#8221;) magic. It&#8217;s where my interests lie. I don&#8217;t want to make a Harry Dresden copy-cat, though there&#8217;s plenty of them around; and I allude to further adventures that Mike has in &#8220;Family Bonds&#8221;.<\/p>\n<p>Maybe I will keep Grim alive.<\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>Grimaulkin Redeemed has been finished and is at the editor. I feel pretty good about this story. Even though I didn&#8217;t tie up the loose end from Grimaulkin Tempted, I developed Grimaulkin into a reluctant hero, which was the point &hellip; <a href=\"https:\/\/grimaulkin.com\/ljacob-today\/?p=552\">Continue reading <span class=\"meta-nav\">&rarr;<\/span><\/a><\/p>\n","protected":false},"author":1,"featured_media":0,"comment_status":"closed","ping_status":"closed","sticky":false,"template":"","format":"standard","meta":{"footnotes":""},"categories":[16,12,4,8],"tags":[],"class_list":["post-552","post","type-post","status-publish","format-standard","hentry","category-brothers-of-the-zodiac-earth","category-grimaulkin","category-inspiration","category-war-mage"],"_links":{"self":[{"href":"https:\/\/grimaulkin.com\/ljacob-today\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/posts\/552","targetHints":{"allow":["GET"]}}],"collection":[{"href":"https:\/\/grimaulkin.com\/ljacob-today\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/posts"}],"about":[{"href":"https:\/\/grimaulkin.com\/ljacob-today\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/types\/post"}],"author":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/grimaulkin.com\/ljacob-today\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/users\/1"}],"replies":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/grimaulkin.com\/ljacob-today\/index.php?rest_route=%2Fwp%2Fv2%2Fcomments&post=552"}],"version-history":[{"count":1,"href":"https:\/\/grimaulkin.com\/ljacob-today\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/posts\/552\/revisions"}],"predecessor-version":[{"id":553,"href":"https:\/\/grimaulkin.com\/ljacob-today\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/posts\/552\/revisions\/553"}],"wp:attachment":[{"href":"https:\/\/grimaulkin.com\/ljacob-today\/index.php?rest_route=%2Fwp%2Fv2%2Fmedia&parent=552"}],"wp:term":[{"taxonomy":"category","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/grimaulkin.com\/ljacob-today\/index.php?rest_route=%2Fwp%2Fv2%2Fcategories&post=552"},{"taxonomy":"post_tag","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/grimaulkin.com\/ljacob-today\/index.php?rest_route=%2Fwp%2Fv2%2Ftags&post=552"}],"curies":[{"name":"wp","href":"https:\/\/api.w.org\/{rel}","templated":true}]}}