{"id":526,"date":"2018-03-11T16:32:53","date_gmt":"2018-03-11T20:32:53","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/grimaulkin.com\/ljacob-today\/?p=526"},"modified":"2018-03-11T16:35:06","modified_gmt":"2018-03-11T20:35:06","slug":"new-short-coming-soon","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/grimaulkin.com\/ljacob-today\/?p=526","title":{"rendered":"New Short Coming Soon"},"content":{"rendered":"<p>For my short story tie-in for <em>Grimaulkin Redeemed<\/em>, I decided to rewrite an old story I did in November 2014 for Thanksgiving. I put it in Scrivener, took out references to <em>City of Heroes<\/em>, and reread it. However, I was <em>reading<\/em> the original. The story with the parts taken out were still in my head and I kept putting them in. The story made perfect sense to me, but it felt wrong on the page. I had my editor read it. He gave me great feedback, and explained that Mike was very angry in that story and not at all sympathetic. &#8220;Apparently, Mike (and you) were in a different place then.&#8221;<\/p>\n<p>So I went back in my journals that far. Yes, I have them from 2012 and sporadically around the house since 1980. I was pissy in 2014. I had been passed over for a promotion (yet again). I was fighting to get my son diagnosed as being on the spectrum. My supports were ripped out from under me in the summer of 2014.<\/p>\n<p>Now&#8230;I&#8217;m rewriting the story again from scratch. It has a good scene that I&#8217;m trying to keep, but I don&#8217;t think it&#8217;s going to work. Mike is a little less angry in this story, a lot more accepting, and things have changed. When I finish the story (title might be &#8220;Our Normal Thanksgiving&#8221;), I&#8217;ll point you to the original and you decide which one you like better.<\/p>\n<p>I&#8217;ve left off in <em>Grimaulkin Redeemed<\/em> with the line, &#8220;Ribs dropped onto plates with an almost unified clatter.&#8221; I&#8217;m itching to continue it, because I know what&#8217;s going to happen next, but I know if I continue, I&#8217;ll write until I&#8217;m &#8220;stuck&#8221;. Then who knows when I&#8217;ll get back to it. So I&#8217;m doing &#8220;Thanksgiving&#8221; so it&#8217;s ready to go.<\/p>\n<p>As of next week, I will officially be committed to go to WorldCon 76 in San Jose. I&#8217;m aiming to get <em>Grimaulkin Redeemed<\/em> done next month (22K words now), ready for publication in August and sale at WorldCon. I may pass <em>War Mage<\/em> on to someone else to do, because I can&#8217;t seem to get it going. <em>Earth<\/em> is mostly done. I have to wrap up Virgo and write more with Taurus.<\/p>\n<p>Episode 17 is up for the Dark Mystic Quill. It&#8217;s about guns. It might be a little political, but it goes into mental health (my &#8220;woe&#8221; section of the podcast).<\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>For my short story tie-in for Grimaulkin Redeemed, I decided to rewrite an old story I did in November 2014 for Thanksgiving. I put it in Scrivener, took out references to City of Heroes, and reread it. However, I was &hellip; <a href=\"https:\/\/grimaulkin.com\/ljacob-today\/?p=526\">Continue reading <span class=\"meta-nav\">&rarr;<\/span><\/a><\/p>\n","protected":false},"author":1,"featured_media":0,"comment_status":"closed","ping_status":"closed","sticky":false,"template":"","format":"standard","meta":{"footnotes":""},"categories":[16,12,8,17],"tags":[],"class_list":["post-526","post","type-post","status-publish","format-standard","hentry","category-brothers-of-the-zodiac-earth","category-grimaulkin","category-war-mage","category-worldcon"],"_links":{"self":[{"href":"https:\/\/grimaulkin.com\/ljacob-today\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/posts\/526","targetHints":{"allow":["GET"]}}],"collection":[{"href":"https:\/\/grimaulkin.com\/ljacob-today\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/posts"}],"about":[{"href":"https:\/\/grimaulkin.com\/ljacob-today\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/types\/post"}],"author":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/grimaulkin.com\/ljacob-today\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/users\/1"}],"replies":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/grimaulkin.com\/ljacob-today\/index.php?rest_route=%2Fwp%2Fv2%2Fcomments&post=526"}],"version-history":[{"count":3,"href":"https:\/\/grimaulkin.com\/ljacob-today\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/posts\/526\/revisions"}],"predecessor-version":[{"id":529,"href":"https:\/\/grimaulkin.com\/ljacob-today\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/posts\/526\/revisions\/529"}],"wp:attachment":[{"href":"https:\/\/grimaulkin.com\/ljacob-today\/index.php?rest_route=%2Fwp%2Fv2%2Fmedia&parent=526"}],"wp:term":[{"taxonomy":"category","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/grimaulkin.com\/ljacob-today\/index.php?rest_route=%2Fwp%2Fv2%2Fcategories&post=526"},{"taxonomy":"post_tag","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/grimaulkin.com\/ljacob-today\/index.php?rest_route=%2Fwp%2Fv2%2Ftags&post=526"}],"curies":[{"name":"wp","href":"https:\/\/api.w.org\/{rel}","templated":true}]}}