{"id":482,"date":"2017-11-26T14:05:49","date_gmt":"2017-11-26T18:05:49","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/grimaulkin.com\/ljacob-today\/?p=482"},"modified":"2017-11-26T14:06:05","modified_gmt":"2017-11-26T18:06:05","slug":"almost-there","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/grimaulkin.com\/ljacob-today\/?p=482","title":{"rendered":"Almost there!"},"content":{"rendered":"<p><em>Grimaulkin Tempted<\/em> is to be released on December 1. On December 2 is the launch party at the Author Expo at Rhodes on the Pawtuxet. (The Kindle edition is available right now on Amazon, I noticed.)<\/p>\n<p>I sold two copies to my local fans so far already. I&#8217;m waiting on feedback from one of them&#8211;he reads fast, and said he would definitely read it this weekend.<\/p>\n<p>Started work on <em>War Mage<\/em>, getting through a block right at the beginning of the book. I know the things I want to set up, but the problem is how long it will take me to set them up, and I also don&#8217;t want to insult the reader. See, Brent is supposed to be a detective, but he&#8217;s not. Clues have to be pretty obvious to him. I&#8217;m afraid of pissing off the reader by bopping them over the head with obvious clues. I don&#8217;t want them to scream at the book, &#8220;But can&#8217;t you see that blahdy-blah-blah????&#8221; How do I get him to grow into being a detective? That&#8217;s one of the transformations of the character.<\/p>\n<p>A character needs to be transformed by the end of the book. It&#8217;s not the same person as it was at the beginning. Brent, at the beginning, feels that the Army is giving him a second chance, and if he blows it, he&#8217;s screwed. In addition, he&#8217;s scared. Scared of failure, scared of trust, scared of getting tortured again.\u00a0 At the end, he might fail in one sense, but he&#8217;s a stronger man for it. In the first draft, my beta reader said that he was a pussy at the end. Well, I have to change that. I know the beginning. It&#8217;s getting to the end that&#8217;s giving me problems.<\/p>\n<p><em>Earth<\/em> is supposed to be next on the docket. I really should, timewise, work on that. It&#8217;s due for&#8230;March? But writing erotica is easy once I get started. I practice it in <em>Champions<\/em> and I have an excellent partner. I pick up lessons from him that I may use in my erotica.\u00a0 It&#8217;s the story that I get hung up on. Erotica is more than sex, sex, sex, scenery, sex, sex, dialogue, sex&#8230; There&#8217;s a story, with characters and a plot and a reason for their pairing. For Taurus I&#8217;m stealing a plot that someone posted on Queer Romance Ink; well, not really stealing. Modifying. The original plot includes werewolves. My world in <em>Zodiac<\/em> does not include werewolves. For Capricorn, I&#8217;m modifying <em>Hell on Wheels<\/em>. And for Virgo, it might be a sweet romance in the middle of a tumultuous time.<\/p>\n<p>Well, it&#8217;s back to chiseling out of marble that is <em>War Mage<\/em>. Time to burn some incense and invoke the muses. Let&#8217;s see what they come up with for today.<\/p>\n<p>&nbsp;<\/p>\n<p>&nbsp;<\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>Grimaulkin Tempted is to be released on December 1. On December 2 is the launch party at the Author Expo at Rhodes on the Pawtuxet. (The Kindle edition is available right now on Amazon, I noticed.) 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