{"id":386,"date":"2017-04-09T14:50:21","date_gmt":"2017-04-09T18:50:21","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/grimaulkin.com\/ljacob-today\/?p=386"},"modified":"2017-04-09T14:50:21","modified_gmt":"2017-04-09T18:50:21","slug":"podcasting-editing-and-revising-oh-my","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/grimaulkin.com\/ljacob-today\/?p=386","title":{"rendered":"Podcasting, editing, and revising, oh my"},"content":{"rendered":"<p>I so far have laid down five minutes of my podcast. It&#8217;s about &#8220;Writing, Witchcraft and Woe, but not necessarily in that order.&#8221; I have music that I bought to use for the beginning tracks.<\/p>\n<p>I went and bought a nice expensive Blue Yeti mike. Problem is, it&#8217;s too good, and picks up everything. It picks up my refrigerator when it runs (it&#8217;s loud, anyway), my furnace when it goes off, and the cars outside. And my cat purring. Being that I&#8217;m an idiot when it comes to audio, I suppose I have to do something on the mike to get it to stop picking up ambient noise. So I&#8217;m using a headset mike, which isn&#8217;t as good and definitely isn&#8217;t as clear.<\/p>\n<p>What a pain in the ass editing is though. I have to cut so much space (I wheeze when I breathe). that it sounds like I&#8217;m not breathing. I can tell editing now on other podcasts. It makes people sound so intelligent. Now I know why.<\/p>\n<p>Segue into&#8230;<\/p>\n<p>I got my edits back for\u00a0<em>Grimaulkin<\/em>! I could sit here and say, &#8220;Oh, my God, it&#8217;s such a mess.&#8221; Nearly every page has an edit on it. I&#8217;m up to page 92 and there were two pages without edits. I use way too many commas and I don&#8217;t believe in the Oxford comma (the one that comes before <em>and<\/em>\u00a0in a list). Maybe I should crack open that <em>Chicago Manual of Style<\/em> book I have\u00a0if I&#8217;m going to line-edit.<\/p>\n<p>There&#8217;s a few\u00a0edits that I&#8217;ve chosen to take as suggestions. Most of the edits, though, clarify things or point out whether I should\/could do something better.\u00a0I have the curse of the pantser: I often write description after the object is introduced, not before.<\/p>\n<p>Noticing this, it helps me to work a little on <em>War Mage<\/em>. I&#8217;m still deep in that surgery as well. Right now I&#8217;m clarifying the scenes I&#8217;ve written and noticed 1) I have no plot and 2) I have no action and 3) Brent reacts to nothing. I think I have to throw in a murder<\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>I so far have laid down five minutes of my podcast. It&#8217;s about &#8220;Writing, Witchcraft and Woe, but not necessarily in that order.&#8221; I have music that I bought to use for the beginning tracks. I went and bought a &hellip; <a href=\"https:\/\/grimaulkin.com\/ljacob-today\/?p=386\">Continue reading <span class=\"meta-nav\">&rarr;<\/span><\/a><\/p>\n","protected":false},"author":1,"featured_media":0,"comment_status":"closed","ping_status":"closed","sticky":false,"template":"","format":"standard","meta":{"footnotes":""},"categories":[12,9,13,8],"tags":[],"class_list":["post-386","post","type-post","status-publish","format-standard","hentry","category-grimaulkin","category-platform","category-promotion","category-war-mage"],"_links":{"self":[{"href":"https:\/\/grimaulkin.com\/ljacob-today\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/posts\/386","targetHints":{"allow":["GET"]}}],"collection":[{"href":"https:\/\/grimaulkin.com\/ljacob-today\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/posts"}],"about":[{"href":"https:\/\/grimaulkin.com\/ljacob-today\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/types\/post"}],"author":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/grimaulkin.com\/ljacob-today\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/users\/1"}],"replies":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/grimaulkin.com\/ljacob-today\/index.php?rest_route=%2Fwp%2Fv2%2Fcomments&post=386"}],"version-history":[{"count":1,"href":"https:\/\/grimaulkin.com\/ljacob-today\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/posts\/386\/revisions"}],"predecessor-version":[{"id":387,"href":"https:\/\/grimaulkin.com\/ljacob-today\/index.php?rest_route=\/wp\/v2\/posts\/386\/revisions\/387"}],"wp:attachment":[{"href":"https:\/\/grimaulkin.com\/ljacob-today\/index.php?rest_route=%2Fwp%2Fv2%2Fmedia&parent=386"}],"wp:term":[{"taxonomy":"category","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/grimaulkin.com\/ljacob-today\/index.php?rest_route=%2Fwp%2Fv2%2Fcategories&post=386"},{"taxonomy":"post_tag","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/grimaulkin.com\/ljacob-today\/index.php?rest_route=%2Fwp%2Fv2%2Ftags&post=386"}],"curies":[{"name":"wp","href":"https:\/\/api.w.org\/{rel}","templated":true}]}}