{"id":279,"date":"2016-06-26T13:19:11","date_gmt":"2016-06-26T17:19:11","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/grimaulkin.com\/ljacob-today\/?p=279"},"modified":"2016-06-26T13:19:11","modified_gmt":"2016-06-26T17:19:11","slug":"preparation","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/grimaulkin.com\/ljacob-today\/?p=279","title":{"rendered":"Preparation"},"content":{"rendered":"<p>I&#8217;m going along pretty good with the new novel. Mostly, though, I&#8217;m doing preparation.<\/p>\n<p>I figured out this method with <em>Blood From a Stone<\/em>, my NaNoWriMo book of last year. Because I only had 2 weeks to do NaNo, I had to have a road map. I usually pants the thing, and I end up going off on tangents and side roads, getting lost. <em>War Mage<\/em>&#8216;s first draft is a lot like that. It&#8217;s why I ended up with 6 drafts before sending it to the editor (and I know I have issues there).<\/p>\n<p>So with this one, I&#8217;m doing up a main plot, and then sub-plots. I happened to be reading a book at the same time called <a href=\"https:\/\/www.amazon.com\/Blueprint-Your-Bestseller-Manuscript-Architecture\/dp\/B00FGW968O\/\"><em>Blueprint Your Bestseller<\/em><\/a>, which describes this method that I stumbled upon. Instead of calling them &#8220;plots&#8221; the author of this book calls them &#8220;series&#8221;. You have a theme, which is the main series, and then other series that point to the theme.<\/p>\n<p>I always start out with a theme. <em>Homecoming<\/em>&#8216;s was <em>Home is where your heart is<\/em>. <em>War Mage&#8217;<\/em>s is <em>Friends can be found anywhere<\/em>. <em>High Road<\/em>&#8216;s is <em>It&#8217;s better to take the high road<\/em>. A lot of times my titles allude to the theme. Heavy-handed, aren&#8217;t I?<\/p>\n<p>There can be only one theme in the book, and every scene and series has to point to it. The first draft of <em>War Mage<\/em> showed me that I had scenes that went no where, scenes that had no place in the book, and characters that were repetitious and similar. Using the method in <em>Blueprint<\/em>, which was written for rewrites, I can tear apart <em>War Mage<\/em>\u00a0and put it back together, with a main plot and subplots. (Sorry, but I&#8217;m going to use those terms instead of &#8220;series&#8221;.)<\/p>\n<p>What I&#8217;ve been doing mostly is character sketches and subplots from the characters. Some of them want to be furniture, so I&#8217;m doing quick physical descriptions of them and their attitudes. When stuck, I use StoryMatic or The Positive Traits Thesaurus or Negative Traits Thesaurus to get an attitude.<\/p>\n<p>Other characters want a life of their own, so they get the full treatment. I have tiny composition books I bought at Dollar Tree; they come in a package of 3 for a dollar.<\/p>\n<p><a href=\"https:\/\/grimaulkin.com\/ljacob-today\/wp-content\/uploads\/2016\/06\/char-book.jpg\"><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" class=\"alignnone size-medium wp-image-281\" src=\"https:\/\/grimaulkin.com\/ljacob-today\/wp-content\/uploads\/2016\/06\/char-book-300x225.jpg\" alt=\"char book\" width=\"300\" height=\"225\" srcset=\"https:\/\/grimaulkin.com\/ljacob-today\/wp-content\/uploads\/2016\/06\/char-book-300x225.jpg 300w, https:\/\/grimaulkin.com\/ljacob-today\/wp-content\/uploads\/2016\/06\/char-book-768x576.jpg 768w, https:\/\/grimaulkin.com\/ljacob-today\/wp-content\/uploads\/2016\/06\/char-book-1024x768.jpg 1024w\" sizes=\"auto, (max-width: 300px) 100vw, 300px\" \/><\/a><\/p>\n<p>I have a character sheet that I downloaded from some writer&#8217;s site I don&#8217;t remember, but it goes into excruciating detail. I don&#8217;t answer all the questions &#8211; except for Brent, I really should redo his character sketch. I pick and choose some questions and put them in the little composition books. For example, one question is, &#8220;Does he want to have children?&#8221; My character, a staff sergeant, is going through a divorce according to the subplot. Does he have kids? How many? What are their ages and names? What are they like &#8211; brief traits? How does he feel about them? I fill up a small page with these answers, which spurs me on to other questions, and rinse and repeat.<\/p>\n<p>From the characters come the subplots. I am an index card freak. I write out the scenes on index cards and put them on a ring. <a href=\"http:\/\/www.staples.com\/Staples-reg-Ruled-Index-Cards-on-a-Ring-Blue-Poly-Cover-3-x-5-\/product_365997\">Staples <\/a>has what I normally use, and they can be found sometimes for $1-$1.50. I bought oodles of them on sale, so I have a box full of them. I write out or keep in mind the subplot&#8217;s main point &#8211; the &#8220;where am I going with this&#8221; idea &#8211; and then I write out the scenes. Then I thread them among the main plot on the ring.<\/p>\n<p><a href=\"https:\/\/grimaulkin.com\/ljacob-today\/wp-content\/uploads\/2016\/06\/index-card.jpg\"><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" class=\"alignnone size-medium wp-image-280\" src=\"https:\/\/grimaulkin.com\/ljacob-today\/wp-content\/uploads\/2016\/06\/index-card-300x225.jpg\" alt=\"index card\" width=\"300\" height=\"225\" srcset=\"https:\/\/grimaulkin.com\/ljacob-today\/wp-content\/uploads\/2016\/06\/index-card-300x225.jpg 300w, https:\/\/grimaulkin.com\/ljacob-today\/wp-content\/uploads\/2016\/06\/index-card-768x576.jpg 768w, https:\/\/grimaulkin.com\/ljacob-today\/wp-content\/uploads\/2016\/06\/index-card-1024x768.jpg 1024w\" sizes=\"auto, (max-width: 300px) 100vw, 300px\" \/><\/a><\/p>\n<p>This card is using the subplot named &#8220;Sergeant&#8221; (at the top) and goes into a scene. I don&#8217;t give a lot of details because then I&#8217;m writing the scene, I believe. I give enough to whet the muse&#8217;s appetite, or to spur on what I was thinking of at the time.<\/p>\n<p>Sometimes, though, I get the urge to write. I&#8217;ve prepared the first few scenes, so I know where I&#8217;m going with those, and those are the ones I write. I&#8217;m still in chapter one, but I&#8217;m on scene three. I need to make &#8220;looking at profiles&#8221; exciting.<\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>I&#8217;m going along pretty good with the new novel. Mostly, though, I&#8217;m doing preparation. I figured out this method with Blood From a Stone, my NaNoWriMo book of last year. 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